Comments on: A departure http://www.clareified.com/2008/03/03/a-departure/ Me fail English? That's unpossible. Sat, 10 Jan 2009 04:34:00 +0000 http://wordpress.org/?v=2.6.2 By: Jordan http://www.clareified.com/2008/03/03/a-departure/#comment-127697 Jordan Tue, 04 Mar 2008 22:17:54 +0000 http://www.clareified.com/2008/03/03/a-departure/#comment-127697 I really liked the first paragraph that starts, "I’ve actually seriously started working on a novel..." But after that I got bored, and then a housefly flew by me, so I chased that for a bit, and then when I got back to my computer, I realized that it was my turn to move on Scrabulous, so I didn't get to anything after "By Jennifer Fields." But that first part was pretty good! I really liked the first paragraph that starts, “I’ve actually seriously started working on a novel…” But after that I got bored, and then a housefly flew by me, so I chased that for a bit, and then when I got back to my computer, I realized that it was my turn to move on Scrabulous, so I didn’t get to anything after “By Jennifer Fields.” But that first part was pretty good!

]]> By: Petitedov http://www.clareified.com/2008/03/03/a-departure/#comment-127649 Petitedov Tue, 04 Mar 2008 16:39:03 +0000 http://www.clareified.com/2008/03/03/a-departure/#comment-127649 I was wondering the same thing as Karol...but I wasn't sure on the whole reality vs. fiction thing. :) I was wondering the same thing as Karol…but I wasn’t sure on the whole reality vs. fiction thing. :)

]]> By: Karol http://www.clareified.com/2008/03/03/a-departure/#comment-127613 Karol Tue, 04 Mar 2008 13:24:12 +0000 http://www.clareified.com/2008/03/03/a-departure/#comment-127613 I finally read it at 8am. It's v.good, you should definitely be a writer, etc. Two things: 1) are you worried about the blurred line between fiction and reality? Like people thinking your super raped you and then your cousins killed him? and 2) I'm pretty sure Jewish girls from North Carolina don't say 'fucking a'. I finally read it at 8am. It’s v.good, you should definitely be a writer, etc. Two things: 1) are you worried about the blurred line between fiction and reality? Like people thinking your super raped you and then your cousins killed him? and 2) I’m pretty sure Jewish girls from North Carolina don’t say ‘fucking a’.

]]> By: Petitedov http://www.clareified.com/2008/03/03/a-departure/#comment-127505 Petitedov Tue, 04 Mar 2008 03:37:15 +0000 http://www.clareified.com/2008/03/03/a-departure/#comment-127505 At first I was surprised how ridiculous the the writing was...and I was wondering about the by line. But then it made sense. That was pretty creepy. I think this is a typo but I'm not sure...All the navel gazing by the New York intellectuals I went to school and worked with drove me nuts. (which not with)? Anyhoo looking forward to the next installment. At first I was surprised how ridiculous the the writing was…and I was wondering about the by line. But then it made sense. That was pretty creepy.

I think this is a typo but I’m not sure…All the navel gazing by the New York intellectuals I went to school and worked with drove me nuts. (which not with)?

Anyhoo looking forward to the next installment.

]]> By: Chilly http://www.clareified.com/2008/03/03/a-departure/#comment-127493 Chilly Tue, 04 Mar 2008 02:19:52 +0000 http://www.clareified.com/2008/03/03/a-departure/#comment-127493 I'd shell out $35 for a hardback of a book that was 250 pages of Dawn and her mom at major holidays. That shit is teh funny. Seriously. The Thanksgiving post was the single greatest blog post of all time. I’d shell out $35 for a hardback of a book that was 250 pages of Dawn and her mom at major holidays. That shit is teh funny.

Seriously. The Thanksgiving post was the single greatest blog post of all time.

]]> By: Casca http://www.clareified.com/2008/03/03/a-departure/#comment-127462 Casca Mon, 03 Mar 2008 23:37:14 +0000 http://www.clareified.com/2008/03/03/a-departure/#comment-127462 LOL, good one Karol. I liked the naked in the bathtub part, but so far it needs more tits if it's going to rise to the level of Dreamgirls. Don't forget the deep throat action in the champagne room either. As for formatting, if you can highlight those parts, it'll be much more readable. LOL, good one Karol.

I liked the naked in the bathtub part, but so far it needs more tits if it’s going to rise to the level of Dreamgirls. Don’t forget the deep throat action in the champagne room either. As for formatting, if you can highlight those parts, it’ll be much more readable.

]]> By: Karol http://www.clareified.com/2008/03/03/a-departure/#comment-127419 Karol Mon, 03 Mar 2008 18:04:16 +0000 http://www.clareified.com/2008/03/03/a-departure/#comment-127419 "Jesse Michaels was the first woman to win the Main Event of the World Series of Poker. She was also the first black person to win the coveted bracelet and the $13 million first place prize money." Hahahahaha. I only read that part so far but yes, it's pretty hilarious. “Jesse Michaels was the first woman to win the Main Event of the World Series of Poker. She was also the first black person to win the coveted bracelet and the $13 million first place prize money.”

Hahahahaha. I only read that part so far but yes, it’s pretty hilarious.

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